Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Inside the mind of child killer Melvin Jones

Inside the case of the sex offender who killed an 11 year-old boy for cheating on him, by the BPD homicide detective who worked the case.
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  1. SeanWed Mar 23, 10:57:00 AM EDT

    "Inside the case of the sex offender who killed an 11 year-old boy for cheating on him for the BPD homicide detective who worked the case."

    What?!? WTF does that mean? Were these words drawn randomly from a hat? Is this a refrigerator magnet poem?

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  2. Stewie del GatoWed Mar 23, 02:54:00 PM EDT

    2nd "for" should be "by".

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  3. ChamWed Mar 23, 02:55:00 PM EDT

    Sean, I don't understand that either. I'm totally confused.

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  4. Maurice BradburyWed Mar 23, 04:09:00 PM EDT

    maybe that's what it's like inside the mind of Melvin Jones?

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  5. SeanWed Mar 23, 04:40:00 PM EDT

    So...

    "Inside the case of the sex offender who killed an 11 year-old boy for cheating on him by the BPD homicide detective who worked the case."

    That's only SLIGHTLY better.

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  6. SeanWed Mar 23, 04:44:00 PM EDT

    "Inside the case of the sex offender who killed an 11 year-old boy for cheating on him, by the BPD homicide detective who worked the case."

    Okay, I see a comma has now been added - that helps somewhat. Um... maybe change the first "case" to "mind," to match the title of the post? Also, that makes the second "case" sound less... redundant.

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